Well organised and clearly explained. I suggest that at no point have you challenged design features of the conventional layout of a digipak and advertisement.
Instead say you have used the conventions, even though your track list on Panel 4 is to the left of the frame you have still used this convention.
Your choice of an art deco design is for impact but does not challenge design conventions of cover art. Be careful about this.
Throughout your music you have mainly used conventions of mise-en-scene with the focus on the streets of a British city.
Also you could add another slide indicating how you've used the conventions of a music video in length, and montage narrative to market your artist.
Well organised and clearly explained. I suggest that at no point have you challenged design features of the conventional layout of a digipak and advertisement.
ReplyDeleteInstead say you have used the conventions, even though your track list on Panel 4 is to the left of the frame you have still used this convention.
Your choice of an art deco design is for impact but does not challenge design conventions of cover art. Be careful about this.
Throughout your music you have mainly used conventions of mise-en-scene with the focus on the streets of a British city.
Also you could add another slide indicating how you've used the conventions of a music video in length, and montage narrative to market your artist.
Thank you for the feedback, I'll get to it asap.
ReplyDeleteJust one thing, I mention I have developed the art deco visual style - not challenged. Is this a mistake in your typing or?
There is a mistake on my part - the slide about OIly Murs, it's meant to be for panel 1. I will move it to the correct position now.